I learned to write the word Narcissus Proposed High Balcony Tune, please help to correct.

Although the words are gorgeous, some of the things in them cannot be what you have actually seen or experienced, so it is a bit apocryphal. The second half of the writing is a bit interesting. The idea of artistic conception is not bad.,It's just that there are words, hehe, don't blame me for saying it's not good.,Most of the words in this are copy.

And the scope is too narrow, it is recommended that you read more poems to expand yourself. There are also techniques for the general poetic rhythm. "You can borrow it without copying”

Very good, if it's really the first time to fill in the words, then you are considered a genius. However, it is still necessary to learn basic knowledge of poetry, such as the rhythm of the law.